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I'm of two minds, on the one hand the novel was more emotional, I felt Edith's and Killian's desperation much more keenly. I was also much more afraid that the novel would reassert itself afterall, because despite her efforts it always bounced back to the og plot. On the other hand I do like that Edith's efforts to gain the trust of the secondary characters is bearing fruit here in a way it never seemed to in the novel (her maid, the guy she works with, and the duchess were nice but only Killian ever really heard their opinions on Edith, it never seemed to reach anyone else who was important to the plot). It makes the world feel as if it's moved closer to being a real place than being a story world. The novel played it more like Edith slowly became the main character of her own story, but the world itself never really stopped being from a book (like when Killian saved her at the last second from her obsessive stalker, it was made clearer in the novel that it was because her efforts had led her to become the FL of her own rom-com and as her ML Killian basically gained the ability to save her at the last second consistently) basically things slowly worked out because she started to gain plot armor through her efforts. The manwha seems to be more focused on every time she broke the author's control the world became more anchored in realistic logic.
Time for a little flavor...
Flaunting with title powertruly a merchant rather than martial artist
Madam phonix from the early chapters???